Blog
More evaluation needed.
explain choice of imagery and type.
Consider type and layout, layout ideas?
Show in context
Experimentation of development
Earlier posts work well, more visually interesting.
Good quantity. Especially of illustration and ideas.
Design production and development well documented.
Good range of information.
The mock of the clothing isn't good enough yet. Spend time making this better.
Design is nice but need to be applied better to clothing.
Nice illustrations
Quality use of blog, images and standard of recording information.
Why postcards? How does your range relate.
Rats- not very attractive.
clear blog
Boards
What is purpose of postcards?
label styles different (doesn't really tie in)
High quallity of production.
Tags need to tie in with the rest of the range
Not industry standard yet, postcards are not double sided.
Your boards need annotation. At the moment they don't tell a story
Tag lables- do they need a board to themselves?
Tags should be on clothes.
Evidence of design decisions.
Select key design movements and include on boards.
Context where is the product going to be placed?
Photograph.
Evidence is there, selecting kep points and categorizing them.
Work hasn't got same thone of voice. Very unclear as what the products are and what the development is.
Needs putting into context and some explanation with it.
Layout/info on boards
name
module code
board number
brief title
Alignment use space (create space)
